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Lucar


A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 6 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

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  • 9 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

    0 comments · 99 views
  • 10 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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  • 13 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

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  • 13 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

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Nov
22nd
2021

Next Chapter · 11:28pm Nov 22nd, 2021

The next chapter of UME may come several days later than usual. The ultimate fight against Cankentriops reveals to be a difficult one to write. Fights involving at least one huge team of fighters against a very powerful opponent generally are (so you can imagine how the Star Allies Arc from A Sweetie Dreamland had been hell to write toward the end). To not help, I took some time finding a theme that I judged good for the fight, and then I fell sick and I couldn't focus enough more than a few minutes at once to write.

Also, recently, I have been rereading the story, and after rereading the Undertale Arc, I'm thinking of rewriting the end. Now that I have been thinking about it, there's something that isn't logic. At the end, Sweetie Belle used her powers to bring Chara back, so why not do the same for the other six humans by the same occasion? I wonder how I didn't think of that. I love reading fics where the other humans get a second chance somehow. These poor kids deserve one.

Comments ( 17 )

Sweetie remembers that she could and messes with time travel, causing the herself to enter the genocide run?

Or just ask apple bloom

Also, can we get links to those stories?

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Actually, Sweetie Belle can't time travel (or rewind/fast-forwarding time). She hasn't the power yet. At best, she can slow down or accelerate time a bit, but that's all. Also, as it was stated in the story, she doesn't have a past-self, like she doesn't have a future-self. Only her present-self exist. So she can't do stuff like go back in time to tell herself to do something different.

As for the stories, you are speaking of stories where the dead humans get a second chance? I don't remember them. I will try to find them again, but I can't guarantee it.

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… right, what about apple bloom?

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What about Apple Bloom? Sweetie Belle hadn't meet Apple Bloom yet back in the Undertale Arc.

Well, I’m personally down for it.

On a side note,I think that it’s kind of implied(I don’t actually Know,just seems like the Fandom interpreted it that way)that every Human kid falls in differents eras of Time since monsters first were sealed in the underground.

So It would be amusing seeing the first souls to fall to be the more astounded and marveled with all the new things Humanity had Done.

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I mean after this

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We know that Chara fell into the Underground sometime during the 21st century. We don't know how much time passed between then and Frisk's fall, but it must range from a few decades to at least a century. So I don't think that the children will have problems with the technology.
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I still don't know what you mean with Apple Bloom.

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After she finishes this, take apple bloom to undertale

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Well, this will eventually happen. And remember that there's the whole part with the Genocide Run.

I admittedly skipped the undertale arc, mostly due to my lack of interest in the game itself.

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I understand. You still may need to read it because the characters may appear again later, and you may wonder why, for example, Frisk can create magical golden flowers, or why she has a... particular relationship with Asriel and Chara.

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I mean to revive them

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If it really bothers me that much, i'll read it when it comes up.

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It won't be needed. Beside, Apple Bloom can't revive people. She's the Spirit of Death, not Life.

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Oh really? I did not Know that.

my head canon was that the village where Asriel brings Back Chara is the same City we see in the distance from the end of the Pacifist Route,Evolved through the Centuries

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She can find the souls, Pretty sure that’s all sweetie would need

to bring out gaster of the void sight that Sweetie Belle will have full control of its powers therefore the omniscient thanks to human souls. she went out where he was and brought him back with no problem.

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