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ShadowStar_IMHP


I'm a writer of fanfictions. Of course being an amature I have spelling and grammar errors.

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  • 32 weeks
    I just don’t have the drive anymore

    I tried o really did. However it just not there anymore.

    I just don’t have the desire to write. I deleted the story “Me, Myself, and I” because it just had two chapters.

    I’m resetting the story “Mother Moon, Fallen Sunset” to canceled.

    Sorry for all those that followed me, the spark of writing just not there.

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  • 38 weeks
    Sorry for taking so long

    One of the reasons I stopped writing was that I had far less time on my hands. Not only am I now working full time, I have no one at home doing housework. So all that dirty laundry, dishes, and yardwork falls on me. My sister lives with me but is almost as lazy as Zephyr Breeze (JK). She's a great teacher; she's always working on a project for her class or crafting.

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  • 42 weeks
    I have the names for my OC.

    The three heads for my Chimera would be named. Wynken Blynken and Nod for the old Lullaby.

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  • 43 weeks
    Yup it's official I'm writing Me, Myself, and I instead of the other story.

    I just spent the Fourth of July writing, and I already have a higher word count than the other story I'm working on. The chapter reaches 1900+ words, and I still have more to do. The updated paid Grammarly has some nice features that make finding those pesky grammar errors easier.

    It seems I got it done today! Well, July 5th at 1:am my time.

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  • 43 weeks
    I hate my muse. Really sometimes it like my muse is drunk.

    It will be a little longer than I thought for the story of another entity in Luna's body with Nightmare Moon and Luna herself.

    I have to write up a more detailed outline. I realized I had an exciting start but didn't have a story arc.

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Nov
10th
2021

Question I need an answer to. · 10:45am Nov 10th, 2021

Okay I have a issue I need some brain storming for.

The situation is two characters are trapped in a sound proof room. There is a window with thick glass.

The characters don’t have the means to break the glass. They can however see somepony outside who could help.

How would you get them noticed?

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Comments ( 8 )

I think the simplest thing would be a bright flash of light, if possible. Sound can’t escape so it’s got to be something that will grab their attention. If the outside person is facing away from the two, maybe a light turning on and off behind them would be noticeable, like someone flashing their car headlights is.

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Yeah that could work. It where I’m leaning towards.

It a situation I won’t get to till the climax of my story.

Reminds of the first scene of the movie "saw 7"
https://youtu.be/-hzbNjxnxiI

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Nothing so gore filled.

Note that it's quite hard to make a soundproof room with a window. There's also a difference between a room that'll make it so anything spoken inside cannot be heard outside, and a room where the window is so thick that even directly hitting it cannot be heard.

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True I was trying to be as spoiler free as possible. So I didn’t elaborate on the details.

Two characters trapped in a room trying to get someone’s attention is a very common trope I think. So I wasn’t afraid of giving out the climax.

Aside from light flashing, there's also sound in the form of vibrations. If they could somehow generate either a loud single instance of noise, or a repeated series (think heavy bass going off) of noises, it could do it.

Making the floor shake is bound to draw some notice.

Lots of motion/banging

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