First three chapters rewrite. · 3:44pm Sep 2nd, 2021
Chapter 1 is going to be completely new. It will focus on Scootaloo's birthday, her new tail and discovery at being a draconequus. There will also be a visit to a local theme park run by witches and wizards for Muggles based of Canterlot. For example, stage shows, a dragon roller coaster, real magic disguised as fake, you know, your cheesy, gimicky type of standard children's theme park. I am open to suggestions on what mischief they get up to there. I.e. Fred and George setting of fireworks, turning the roller coaster into a real dragon, that sort of thing.
Chapter 2 will only involve some minor changes. It will start from the second half of chapter 1.
Chapter 3 Will again likely not involve many changes being the bridge between the summer hols and the shopping trip again.
Alright then. What about they make the Carousel fly?
Test of strength hammer is a warm up for Bloom? Scotts calling out a fake seer. The twin taking bets for jousting?
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These are incredible. Chaos at the fair sounds great!
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Indeed!
I can see them trying to make the rides more exciting. If this is intended for younger kids or designed to be moved the rides would be very tame. You might have a pony ride, a little train, bumper cars
I would they have the Cotten Candy made of real clouds maybe as well?? Mishaps with Sweetie and baking Area as well. Yep scoots will very Not be happy at the “Tame”speeds the coster goes at as well.