Only One Ending Now

Well I had been working on an alternate ending for "Ready for Commitment" so that the depressing ending wasn't the only one. Well I completed the alternate ending and scrapped the original, depressing ending. So now the engagement between Colgate and Fluttershy is the only ending and I'm going to try and write a sequel to it at some point. With the way my mind has been working lately I don't know when that will be but I will try and get it done before the end of the year.

TReady for Commitment

• MLP: FiM
• Romance

Fluttershy and Colgate have been dating for six months and while they are both happy, Colgate realizes that she is ready to be more than marefriends with her and will do anything to make sure she says yes when she asks her the big question.

• Anthro
• Fluttershy
• Rarity
• Lyra
• Minuette

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Comments

[sunshim_13]

This is the rough equivalent to having the popular opinion on Star Wars sequels saying they’re not as good

Everyone loves happy endings

[StormLuna]

5574502

Well I even grew to where I loathed the original ending. I figured a happy ending for Colgate and Fluttershy would be better, that and it gives me the chance to do a story involving their journey from the end of the second story to their wedding.

[sunshim_13]

5574503
Speaking of which

I’m gonna rewrite my first mature story so it can fit with the sequel

The original story I’m still proud of… even tho it’s not perfect, far from it, it really help set the bar for me. That story was always there for me.

But now I would make a sequel but in order to do that I must rewrite it

[StormLuna]

5574507

Just remember you'll have to alter the original story since the site has rules about re-submitting the same story twice.

[sunshim_13]

5574525
Don’t worry there will be significant changes

I’ll even put it up to moderate check

[StormLuna]

5574544

So is the rating on this going to change?

[sunshim_13]

5574546
No it’s still gonna be M rated

I’m putting on a completely different OC to use and stretching the time frame of the story including changing the original characters biography and his past. Possible chance that there’ll be more chapters.

[StormLuna]

5574553

Well I don't want to see you get in trouble for submitting something so close to the original that the site mods would see it as submitting the same thing.

[sunshim_13]

5574570
I’ll try to reach out and ask one of the admins first

If they read and they accept I’ll publish

If not then I’ll move the chapters to the original listing of the story

[StormLuna]

5574575

Alright, I just don't want to see you getting in trouble.