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StormLuna


Princess Luna is the best princess and Nightmare Moon is the best queen.

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This story is a sequel to Fluttershy's First Date


Fluttershy and Colgate have been dating for six months and while they are both happy, Colgate realizes that she is ready to be more than marefriends with her. In her efforts to get Fluttershy to say yes to the big question, Colgate will do many unexpected things.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 10 )

Looks pretty intresting looking forward to more :3

9277050

Yep, there is more to come. The day long date isn't coming up in the next chapter but it isn't too far away.

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

10681297
They all come from when I only had the original ending. Most people probably didn't like the ending.

Seems to be a review bomb wave hitting stories.
I don't think it's the odd pairing choice.
This isn't my cup of tea but it seems to be well written and solid enough that I've given it a like.

10952752

Here is why it has so many downvotes. I originally had it end in a way that they fought over their future living situation and had them split up, that is why there are so many downvotes. I ultimately chose to eradicate the old ending and add a much happier one, one that will allow me to do a sequel to this.

10953104
That's a very odd reaction. Did the story not build up their struggles and issues?
Or was the story misleading in tags and description?

10953114

Well perhaps the title was a bit misleading considering with the original ending Colgate wound up not really being ready for commitment because she wasn't willing to sacrifice living in her big house. But it was overall a depressing ending, one that even I didn't like. That is why I changed it. I just promoted it in the biggest promo group and the one I run, I'm hoping it will be better received by people this way....well that and everything just fell apart when Colgate proposed because Fluttershy had her concerns over still being able to have her animals and have Colgate live with her.

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