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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Wednesday
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 1 week
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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  • 3 weeks
    Prereader verdict on new Midnight Rising chapter is in...

    And unfortunately, that verdict is unanimous:

    Complaints were: too meta, hard to follow, does nothing to advance the plot, and potentially makes things worse while trying to fix them.

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  • 4 weeks
    Still waiting on Midnight Rising prereads...

    Which are particularly important this time, because the first preread I got back was negative. As it came from AJ_Aficionado, whose opinions I particularly value mostly because he’s more interested in the story than the sex, I tend to give what he said about it credence but still want to hear from everyone else before I start making changes to the new chapter.

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Mar
20th
2021

Feathered Hearts - Continuation and Chronicles will launch on Sunday · 2:43am Mar 20th, 2021

The all-new chapter is draft complete and getting rave reviews from my prereaders. I promised a lore dump, and readers are going to get it in spades. I do believe these 9200 words will be the first new content on the Feathered Heart story in... [checks] nearly five years.

The story will be titled Feathered Hearts - Continuation and Chronicles to represent that it will contain not just the eventual continuation, but bonus material that fits between earlier chapters--that's the "Chronicles" part of it. I still have to make the story page and conduct a couple editing passes, listening to it recited back to me by the site's voice narration function before I'll call it ready.

And yes, that's Feathered Hearts, plural. The reason should be clear enough upon reading the new chapter. :twilightsmile:

I said I would release a teaser, but reading through it now, I'm just not seeing anything that makes a natural one. Like I said in the previous blog, it's a bonus chapter placed between chapters 3 and 4 of the original story, in a gap of time the original story contained between the attack on Chris/Marco at the end of chapter 3/everyone watching Braveheart at the start of chapter 4.

That said, it assumes the content of the edited chapters, so you'll see Gilda referred to by the rank I'm using for her--Decurion. You will also see my Firefly lore showcased heavily, along with some other lore I came up with on the fly. But I think it all works. Feathered Heart inspired Firefly, which heavily draws on its griffon lore, so as far as I'm concerned, I'm just repaying the debt.

The new story will launch on Sunday morning. So, you are cordially invited to read and rejoin the Feathered Heart saga. This will be the first of many new--and more edited--chapters to come, and I hope it will rekindle interest in the story from old and new readers alike.

Comments ( 10 )

Don't really have anything to say here besides...
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I forget if you answered this but did you get permission to post the continuation on fimfic or was that a no too?

And yes, that's Feathered Hearts, plural.

Maybe a certain mage is getting an expanded role? Whatever it is, I look forward to finding out!

It might be useful to post a link on the Feathered Heart comment section on release day, along with a mass reply to recent commenters, so that they might know as well.

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Don't really have anything to say here besides...
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

:yay: Hope you like the new content!

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I forget if you answered this but did you get permission to post the continuation on fimfic or was that a no too?

I was told that I can post the continuation, but I cannot post old chapters, no matter how much I edited or rewrote them. My only option there was to rewrite the entire story, which I'm not going to do. I would consider that more disrespectful to DEL than simply updating what he has.

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Maybe a certain mage is getting an expanded role? Whatever it is, I look forward to finding out!

In essence, pretty much everybody is getting an expanded role! But yes, I won't neglect our favorite magus.

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It might be useful to post a link on the Feathered Heart comment section on release day, along with a mass reply to recent commenters, so that they might know as well.

I will be certain to do so.

I can't wait! Fortrakt is amazing in the new chapter, among other positive points.

While I have no real interest, I wish you the best regardless.

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I can't wait! Fortrakt is amazing in the new chapter, among other positive points.

Thanks! I appreciate your preread and all the comments/edits you left behind.

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While I have no real interest, I wish you the best regardless.

No problem. Good to hear from you again, regardless.

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Oh I'm always here. I just don't always have anything to say.

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So you're lurking? That's cool, especially after all the long comments you posted back in the day. I loved them, but I also know well how draining they can be to do.

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