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ArthurPaige


The name's Derrick. ArthurPaige is just an alias.

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  • 151 weeks
    A Long Awaited Update (June 12th, 2021)

    Hello there, those who still keep an eye on my story and those of you who happen to read this.

    I'm going to be straight with you. I haven't been writing, at all. I mean, I've just started again yesterday. But other than that...

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  • 169 weeks
    Updates (January 31st, 2021)

    Hello again.

    If you haven't seen it, TFiTU is now on hiatus. I've made the decision to do so in order to give myself more creative freedom. I will use this time to focus on other things. I want this year to be productive on my end.

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  • 175 weeks
    My Thoughts on 2020 and Moving Forward

    Hello everyone.

    This year was something else. For all of us, I bet. We are facing a pandemic, literally staring it down. Our mental health took a dip. But, such is the sacrifice to fight our battles. But I promise you, we will come out on top, because it's pain that we grown from.

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  • 176 weeks
    An Update (December 14th, 2020)

    Hello, everyone.

    Well, this disaster of a year is coming to an end, finally. But, I think it's safe to say we've all learned a few things. I sure did.

    First of all, I want to thank the readers of my story, yet again, for sticking with it. I have not given up on it, in fact, I'm positive it's moving forward.

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  • 189 weeks
    Progress

    “I wanted to go back.”

    “We all wanted to go back.”

    “I wanted my family!” “Who knows what's going on with them?!”

    “I don’t blame you.”

    “I just wanted to go home. I just wanted Martha to have a good life.”

    “I know. I know, Arthur.”

    “You don’t!”

    “I do. Perhaps more than everyone else in this castle.” “It’ll be okay.” “It’s going to be okay.”

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Dec
14th
2020

An Update (December 14th, 2020) · 10:15am Dec 14th, 2020

Hello, everyone.

Well, this disaster of a year is coming to an end, finally. But, I think it's safe to say we've all learned a few things. I sure did.

First of all, I want to thank the readers of my story, yet again, for sticking with it. I have not given up on it, in fact, I'm positive it's moving forward.

I have decided to make it more lean. Originally, there were going to be three storylines. Now, there's two. But, I'm planning to write a story about a certain Japanese character that takes place at the same time as TFiTU. Yep, Uyada is getting her own story. Not only that, Princess Celestia will be getting one also! Plus, I'm sure there'll be some room for another... But, I'm getting ahead of myself.

The first two chapters of my story will, yet again, be rewritten. After that, the story will have a steady update schedule, I hope. Yay! (To be clear, I haven't applied the edits yet.)

If you want a taste of my revised writing style, here you go:

The van entered the property. It slowed down to a squeaky halt. Arthur swung the door open, inhaling the calming smells. He took a deep breath in and released it slow and with that, he stepped out onto the pavement. 

The target building was ahead, it would be a short walk, not too long, he'd hoped. It was in the middle of a pine forest glade. The sight was beautiful. The west side of the building bore a pond filled with life, with the dying rain, the croaking frogs made their presence known, loudly. The Moon lit a small portion of the east, it hid, peaking through the passing clouds, framing the scene perfectly. 

But beautiful details weren't important now, what needed to be prominent was the tasks. The tasks Arthur dreaded. The tasks he vowed to never do again. Steal, hurt, vandalize.

A tap on his shoulder brought him back to the reality he had to face. Turning, he found it was his crewmate, Uyada, she held out a small metal object in her hand. Arthur took it and upon closer inspection, found she had passed him a miniature horseshoe. "For luck," she said.

Luck. The reason you walk into a casino, the reason you live right now and like a casino, Arthur gambled. He gambled with his life, his freedom. These three people blindly followed him and one of them just gifted him with luck.

Now, I don't plan on releasing a new story this year. 2020 was hard on all of us, I'm sure. But, who knows? 2021 could show some real promise. I feel... optimistic. I know I've promised a lot of things and I'm sorry for not delivering, truly. But, things are looking up and I'm beginning to look up as well.

Thank you all for reading and I'll see you in the next one.

Peace.
-D

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