My Rewrites for Fairly Odd Friendship Are Done

Hello Fellow Bronies,

I decided, as a Halloween present, to finally finish my rewrites for Equestria Girls:A Fairly Odd Friendship.

As you all can see, I completely redid the whole arc with the Dazzlings from top to bottom, addressing some of the concerns you all had. I published the revised version of that arc just this morning.

With this, I shall return to writing new chapters for EG: FOF within the next week or so.

Please let me know what you all think in the comment section. I hope you all had a good Halloween.

Sincerely,

Redandready45.

Comments

[Darth Wrex]

Excuse me, Red. I might not be able to commission you, but maybe we can work out a deal.

[Mac349]

Wow! I can count the number of authors on my hand I've seen to successfully rewrite their story. Congratulations!

[Venerable Ro]

I'll have to take a look at that.

[WalkinOnTheSun]

Can you right up a quick summary of what major plot points your rewrites changed?

[redandready45]

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Sure.

I didn't change the overall plot, just added and took out several things.

Timmy was being brainwashed with a medallion by the Dazzlings from the start, to explain why he allows himself to manipulated by them.

I took out the Dazzlings crueler moments and gave them some more comedic moments.

I made Twilight immune to Timmy's wish.

Instead of Trixie being bullied by the Dazzlings, she is brainwashed into serving them.