Neocros Adventures : Official Chapter 7 Release · 7:45am Aug 22nd, 2020
I'm back, with this new chapter that honestly took WAY too long to finish. Chapter 7 has a bit of a wild story behind it. In case you don't wanna hear the story I had behind this chapter, you can find the Full chapter here.
Originally it was going to be a 2 part arc, and I written most parts of it a while back. But when I finally reached 7, it started to go downhill, with me feeling like it has shown it's age, despite the writing being average. I struggled to finish it for pretty much all year, but I wasn't willing to let this become another Earth Pony situation, I refused. So I scrapped it, and went back to the drawing board. Due to some setbacks by real life issues, and personal feelings of the world, it costed me a lot. I managed to pull through, even if it was rushed. I will admit, the story isn't that great, but after finishing it, it seems alright, not good, but not atrocious.
Here's the first segment:
"Mouths of Dark"
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The moon gracefully illuminated the land, giving the grass a soft glow, as a large cloudy mansion hovered above the bed of grass.
In their bedroom, Rainbow Dash was having a nice, pleasant dream, feeling confident about herself. She started to wake though, as she felt movement on the bed. The movement was rapid, and seemed desperate. Rainbow wasn't aware however. When Rainbow's eyes flutter open, the movement came to a stop, as if nothing happened.
Dash blinked, since she normally wouldn't wake in the middle of the night, unless from a nightmare. Confused, Rainbow couldn't see her lover in the darkness, only a vague silhouette. She murmured something, as she wrapped her arms around his neck. He wrapped his arms around her as well, but something was off. Neocros was cold, colder than usual. It felt like Neocros had just come from the freezing winter.
