I write about griffs. (♀ | Timezone: UTC + 1 | Discord)
I originally joined to participate in A New World, a New Way just as it was starting to die, but ended up getting into a lot of non-crossovers as well. I still think my standout fic is Silent Wings; while I had to rush the last two chapters, it helped me break a lot of new ground. My interest in My Little Pony has phased in and out over the years, and I don't use this site as much as I used to.
I started doing YouTube Poops a few months ago, but this is my first My Little Pony one.
I just need someone to beta-read it. Here's another sneak peak:
Moony raised her head. “Pleeease can you let us in? Pretty please? We need to do something important!”
“How important?” asked the hippogriff.
“It’s super, duper important!” Moony continued. “See, we want to find out—”
“I’ve heard you have the most accurate historical records on the continent,” Sol interrupted.
Michelle is an ordinary teenage Pokémon Trainer participating in a tournament that's being broadcast on live television... until something unbelievable happens to her that shakes the world.
I'm constantly worried that it feels rushed, and I constantly wish that I could've done the first chapter differently. I don't have this problem with my other ongoing fanfic, which I planned for much longer. I'm considering unpublishing it and doing an extensive rewrite of the first chapter, probably with more focus on Autumn Blaze. Should I?
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Thanks. I always seem to rush fanfics I post on this site, and today, I remembered the last time I considered writing about the Shadows of Almia characters in the Newverse. I didn’t write anything, but I did come up with different ideas for what Pokémon they’d become.