Rainbows After Rain chapter 3 is almost finished!

I just need someone to beta-read it. Here's another sneak peak:

Moony raised her head. “Pleeease can you let us in? Pretty please? We need to do something important!”

“How important?” asked the hippogriff.

“It’s super, duper important!” Moony continued. “See, we want to find out—”

“I’ve heard you have the most accurate historical records on the continent,” Sol interrupted.

“Those are in the royal archives,” he drawled. “Good look getting in th—” Suddenly, the hippogriff’s beak dropped. Sol and Moony turned to see what he was looking at: a pink hippogriff with a purple mane who was just fluttering down to land. She was taller than Sol and Moony, but noticeably shorter and chubbier than the other hippogriffs. She wore a golden tiara, and a strange metal cuboid hung from a strap around her neck.

“Oh. My. Good-ness!” exclaimed the new hippogriff, singing the last word.

“Princess Anemone Petals!” gasped the male hippogriff, showing emotion for the first time. “What are you doing here?”

Anemone held her head high, flicking her mane. “When I heard the guards talking about how two outsiders had arrived, I just had to go and see!” She leaned towards Sol, lifted up the metal cuboid, and pressed a button which caused it to flash. Sol flinched. “I’ve never seen a changeling before, but you’re so a-dor-a-ble!”

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[Comickook]

Looks like the first meeting with the Pipp analogue.