Feb
6th
2020
Need a bit of help · 5:20am Feb 6th, 2020
Okay, I am needing a bit of help. If possible I would like someone to bounce ideas off of and get ideas in response. I am running on empty these days but I am still writing and have a new chapter outlined but after going through it again I scrapped it when it didn't flow well so I am back to square one. Any help is appreciated. At the moment the one I am working on is Witcher so that is the one I would like help with first. Thank you, guys!
Hmm how about Oblivion simply relaxing after the monster hunts Later gets invited to a party (while not entirely enthusiastic about it) along with mane 6, cmc and the princesses, at some point the cmc crash into him somepony (Twilight , Celly or whoever you think fits best) spots his wings and he tries to explain it. Other than that i don't really have any ideas, that way the alicorn secret is out as an accident and you can expand that plotline in further chapters.
Hope i helped somewhat, and sorry for gramma but English isn't my first language, i'm also writing on a phone and have dislexion... so yeah
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Or maybe him spending some time with one of the mane six such as twilight since they seem to be more closer than they think.
Personally I would like to see more about his time in the northern realms. Like maybe talking to Cherilee's class again about some more monsters and what not or talking to Twilight or Applejack about more monsters he's fought or curses he has broken.
More time with his adopted brothers in arms (the guards he taught) and just spending some bro time with them. Maybe some more tail wooping and training. (Same difference)
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That's a fun idea. I have a few mini-chapters written out that I could add that one to. Thank you!