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Gordon Pasha


"We cannot say how long his memory will live, but there is this: A world with no room for the Gordons is a world that will return to the sands." - "Khartoum" (1966)

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  • 223 weeks
    A Glimmer of Hope, Updated

    Update: A Glimmer of Hope is now featured on Equestria Daily.

    Well, I won’t say it’s perfect, but it’s done. Here’s announcing the completion of A Glimmer of Hope, Third Edition.

    Here are the major changes to the story:

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  • 226 weeks
    A Glimmer of Hope

    Just in case anyone is currently reading A Glimmer of Hope who hasn’t read it before:

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    3 comments · 190 views
  • 418 weeks
    New Story Soon

    Today, I finished writing a new story. Revision and formatting comes next, but it should be out in a few days.

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    0 comments · 354 views
  • 508 weeks
    Status Update for "Empire of Pink"

    For those that care (if anyone does):

    I've nearly finished with the next (and so far, longest) chapter of Empire of Pink. I had hoped to have it finished by the start of the weekend, but that hasn't happened. Still, it should be ready sometime over the coming week.

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    0 comments · 309 views
  • 522 weeks
    Quick Update on Things

    No, I have not disappeared.

    I know I said that "Cutie Marked for Death" would have an update soon. But as it stands, it looks like it might take just as long to get it out as it did the last one. Granted, I don't suppose it makes much of a difference, but I had intended to have it out by now and I don't like feeling untrue to my word.

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Jan
7th
2020

A Glimmer of Hope · 2:35pm Jan 7th, 2020

Just in case anyone is currently reading A Glimmer of Hope who hasn’t read it before:

I think it is commonly agreed that the story is in need of some major revisions. After having put it off for a few years, I’m finally trying to make some headway on them. As such, while I try to rewrite and improve some of the story’s weak areas, certain parts of the story will feel disjointed for the time being. Caveat lector.

I hope this won’t take too long, but I just wanted to give a head’s-up.

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I finished up revising a few days ago, actually. I intend to put up another blog detailing the major changes I made, so that people can decide for themselves whether the new version is worth reading or not. But it’s been a busy week, and I never got the chance to sit down and write the blog out. Hopefully, I’ll get it out either today or in the next few days.

The revisions are fairly substantial but are most apparent, I think, in the later chapters. The broad arc of the story remains the same, but a lot of the changes are fairly important. Also, the story is now significantly longer than it already was. I hope anyone who re-reads it will find it much improved over the original story, but I don’t want people to feel they have to reread a now nearly 200k word story if they don’t want to.

Hopefully, when I get the blog out, you’ll have enough information to make up your mind about whether its worth rereading or not.

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