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Underwood


aka UnderwoodART / PinkPony.

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  • 10 weeks
    Two-Wicked Candle

    Its been in progress for a very long time, as I've mentioned before, but the more I push on with new chapters, the more unacceptable the initial chapters become. I got lost in the sauce of the latest chapter, bringing back an old friend (and the complications of planned then rescinded design changes), but I really need to focus back on the original chapter rewrites. You might think this is

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  • 40 weeks
    Writers Block Over (maybe)

    As explained in my last blog entry, I hit a wall after writing an entire chapter that took the sisters' journey in the wrong direction. Since then, I have been stuck on how to reconcile this error; do I rewrite the entire chapter I was proud of, or compromise my greater vision of the story?

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  • 49 weeks
    TToTS Ch.22: When Disaster Strikes

    Oh boy. So, some time ago (sadly not dated because I didn't finish it) I decided to write Tirek/Scorpan's backstory, waiting for a point to insert it. I decided that Chapter 22 was a good a time as any, placing it as a filler while the sisters passed through the Lowlands Forest. Before continuing the (let's call it Tau) backstory, I wanted to keep the momentum of the real journey flowing, so I

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  • 51 weeks
    Flight of the Valkyrie, Complete

    Well, not quite.

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  • 60 weeks
    FotV Ch.1 Updated

    In my pursuit of rewriting Chapter 1 of TToTS (having now finished the Prologue), I accidentally rewrote Chapter 1 of FotV, slightly recontextualising Star's landing and Twilight and Star's behaviour to be more in line with later chapters (the first chapter was three years old!). It's up to you whether you want to reread it; it's 800 words longer, but nothing really different happens. I may

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Dec
21st
2019

Tale of Two Sisters gets a new prologue! · 8:35pm Dec 21st, 2019

Fillies and Gentlecolts, it is with great pleasure that today I announce the release of a brand new chapter to the Tale of Two Sisters story. As previously announced, I had intended to rewrite the first chapter for some time, and while that is still the case, what I started writing became so much more that it was deserving of its own chapter.

The Forgotten History of Equestria is a brief diegesis into--as you may have guessed--the history of Equestria, from the very first coming-together of ponies against the Windigo threat, all the way up to the beginning of the main story and Celestia and Luna's birth. I hope you will enjoy reading about the thousand years we never learned from the show, as it has been carefully woven into my story, future chapters, and the eventual tie into the show. That said, the prologue is entirely optional, and if learning about Equestria's history isn't your cup of tea, you can start from chapter one and not miss out on anything (besides context).

I shall now continue to work on chapter one's rewrite and bring it up to a level that I am happy with before continuing on to chapter ten, which is mostly written already. Until then, have a merry Heart's Warming and a happy new year!

Update: 23rd December
Chapter 8 has been updated to its Second Edition, with significant changes to all of Meadow Flower's dialogue. The story remains the same, but she will seem a lot more like herself now, if you go back to re-read it. The majority of the chapter has also been updated with improved wording and details.

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