FotV Ch.1 Updated · 11:38am Mar 13th, 2023
In my pursuit of rewriting Chapter 1 of TToTS (having now finished the Prologue), I accidentally rewrote Chapter 1 of FotV, slightly recontextualising Star's landing and Twilight and Star's behaviour to be more in line with later chapters (the first chapter was three years old!). It's up to you whether you want to reread it; it's 800 words longer, but nothing really different happens. I may glance over the rest of FotV to ensure consistency, but I don't expect to make such dramatic changes to the rest of it. Time to refocus my energy back on TToTS! (To give you context of the upcoming changes, TToTS's new Prologue is almost 11k words pre-proofing, up from 4.3k, and is fully novelised, rather than in the style of a journal entry.)