Redrawing pictures for Don't Look Inside

I decided to redraw all the pictures from my Don't Look Inside story and I will continue until I redraw everything from the whole series. Right now, I only have one. If you've not read the story, don't look ahead. Pictures are spoiler-y, so yeah.

Sirius during the Tournament:

For the sake of comparison, old version:

Comments

[Wickedkingken]

love it

[Elu]

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Thank you!

[DarkKing2]

Your guy look like the same guy from Dark Souls 3 I will show you a video of him

[DarkKing2]

Start at 0:51

[Sunsong]

Much better! He doesn't look like a horse headed pillar anymore!

P.s. that is kind of rude because I cant draw as well as that old drawing. Sorry and good job.

[Reganadex]

The legs look way too thin is all I have to say.

[Elu]

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That's the inspiration. Sirius used to play Dark Souls 3, so he decided to do some cosplay.

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It's fine, I recognize how bad it actually looked back then. So, thank you!

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I tend to draw things more realistically now, and real horse legs are pretty thin, mostly because most of the fat is stored in the body. Sirius is also supposed to be pretty thin at that point in the story, so it's even more visible.

[DarkKing2]

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[DarkKing2]

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You should make a story about an old man dying of old age and being reincarnated as a pony version of slave Knight Gael.
The name of the story Doors Wide Open.

[Hein des Nisseroi]

Shade of the skull is a lot subtler now.

[Elu]

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Yeah, it was a bit too much and made him look like a corpse when he's supposed to be somewhat healthier than that.