Thoughts about a "E" rated version of my "Sunbutt, Moonbutt, Sparkbutt Sparklebutt, I have Questions"? · 6:38pm Jul 11th, 2019
My "Sunbutt, Moonbutt, Sparkbutt Sparklebutt, I have Questions" Story is the first one to be featured, but one bit of criticism some have given was how the ending was, with the Princesses wanted to...give friendship lessons, being off or even didn't like it, though others did. I did that partly because I didn't want the story to look like a rant of the show and wanted to end it on a silly note, but it might've backfired a little.
So I'm giving thought about rewriting it to make it an "E" version of it, but the "original" will stay up. It would go mostly the same way (but I may add a new question or two) but without the swearing -- since it'll be "E" rated -- and the ending wouldn't go how it did in the original. What are anyone's thoughts about it?
I honestly think since you already have one up, it would really just be a waste of time to do another one, even if some didn’t like the ending to the first one.... Then again, that could just be because I don’t want to proofread another one, but who knows. Regardless, I think the one you have now is just fine the way it is
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It was just something I was wondering about, and it wouldn't be anytime soon if I do decide to write it.
I thought of a new one-shot story that I'll start writing in the near future, and usually, I spend around 2-3 weeks on a chapter or one-shot story. Right now the only story I'm working on is the Eric's crush story.