Quick Editing

Doing a quick - but thorough - editing session on IANG chapters; this editing run (calling them that now) will consist simple fixes but a few story changes, nothing major just some little tweaks so it'll make more sense on future chapters.

So far done some editing on the first and recent chapter now, so check them out to see how I did and if you do spot any mistakes on the edited chapters still then it means I still need to sharpen my editing skills some more. If not, then I learned enough from my previous mistakes.