Any SCP fans out there? · 9:57pm Mar 18th, 2019
I've been enthralled with the SCP ever since I came upon it through a random YouTube search. For those not familiar, I encourage you to go and do a little digging for yourselves as it is some interesting stuff http://www.scp-wiki.net/ But this post is for those already in the know.
Basically, I'm trying to write my own SCP article and I need some editors. Just anyone who has some free time and feels like doing a little peer review. I tried submitting a draft to the group, but they don't seem that big on offering much in the way of constructive criticism. What I would like are suggestions for ways I could shrink this story down to something more manageable and perhaps a way to give the child a bit more personality, but all other suggestions will be given due consideration.
And, as an added incentive, suggestions that turn out helpful/useful will be rewarded with early access to chapters in the stories you guys are actually here to see. https://docs.google.com/document/d/13rUifaCeQTpYJwsyAxX3uwtTmTVYeonoClc6XgVBcLM/edit
It's not really a story. It's more of a culture nowadays, like Pokemon. It's pretty fucking cool.
Not bad.
It's no Mal0, but not bad.
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So, no suggestions?
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Not at the moment.
I only woke up about ten minutes before my previous comment.