Jan
15th
2019
Another Rewrite? · 6:34am Jan 15th, 2019
So, once again, the commentators seem rather displeased with how the last few chapters have turned out. Namely, with how the guard and Luna is portrayed as dumbasses that can't do anything. After some time to think on this, I decided to fix this, as that was not what I wanted. It's not a massive rewrite, but there are some new scenes and reasonings that would hopefully make these chapters up to par with the others. There's also a new character. The chapters in question are 26-29.
Now I'm going to sleep, because it's late now.
