Nov
17th
2018
Still working out the kinks · 8:19pm Nov 17th, 2018
Heyo everypony! Im still working on the story ive been incredibly anxious lately and because of it its kinda been hard writing.
So its slow, like always. Rip. 
Ecen established worlds have to be ironed out for information and constructing a government that would be reasonable and fit pony society was kinda hard so that took a bit, also I need to rewatch the seasons again to remember things right 
though why im doing all this world building is because Warm Smile is going to need it when The Princesses take her in for a few months to teach her how to control that swirling energy known as chaos.
The better she can understand things the better she would be a manipulating it.
XD making living worlds are hard.
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#worldbuildingisatrap
#ablackhole
#andigetsuckedin
#workinghard
Anything that can be done to help?
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like the ones that both check my grammar and help with paragraph structure
Too be honest i just need a good editor
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I could give it a try if your willing to risk it.
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You have to stick with it please I've let two others a link but they never showed up anymore
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I can only try my best.
I might be able to help edit. I don't have much to do right now.