Idea fragment · 1:27am Oct 31st, 2018
I have a fragment of an idea for a story. Kind of want to get some feedback on it.
It would be a story where the characters are humanized, rated T or M, urban fantasy.
The idea is that Twilight is a paranormal investigator in a world where magic is not really believed in. The twist is that she's not entirely alone. After an incident earlier in her career or in school, she now has the succubus Adagio Dazzle essentially haunting her, with Twilight the only one able to see and hear Adagio.
So the main story would be about Twilight trying to investigate some paranormal event or other, and while she did, Adagio would be along. Some times teasing Twilight or tempting her to do something "bad" or "naughty," most often making some bitter or snarky comment or other, and on a rare occasion, offering a piece of advice.
Opinions?
Yes!
Adagio essentially being the 'naughty' devil on Twilight's shoulders...dating must be really tough for her. That is if this Twilight is even interested in dating.
Very generic, but have fun.
I would read this. There are not a whole lot of stories featuring Twi and the Cheese Poof interacting together. This kind of sounds like the premise for a supernatural buddy cop comedy.