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beetlebootboot


Little Free Time; Eyyyy am back after like 4 years :T

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  • 279 weeks
    Murry Crifmus

    I'm hungover, just feeling like saying hope you all are doing well! :twilightsmile:









    Writing still ongoing, just need to find drive

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  • 284 weeks
    Distracted

    Family and irl things keeping me from focusing on the new story, am back to night-time schedules for the time being :T

    Next story should be up sometime relatively soon.

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  • 289 weeks
    Update #1 FTL: Operation Restoration

    Story is up, one half of the prologue has been posted, which I feel is better paced than the rushed beginning chapter I had before in the last iteration, going in a different introduction method starting from the beginning moving forward, rather than the forward going back to the beginning. At least initially, for introduction's sakes.

    (if that read odd to you, it read odd to me)

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  • 289 weeks
    Update #3 Time to Think

    Story finally finished, a load of mental baggage laid to rest (which I'm ironically gonna have to write Daniel's method to alleviate his mental baggage, among other things), I'm left with a few things to ask those who may still be following, or new to reading the story. Specifically: It's very rough beginning... and middle... and parts leading into the end :twilightsheepish:

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  • 291 weeks
    Update #2 Time to Think

    Been delayed due to my own sleep schedule messing with my time, insomnia is a b**** and it's mucking up my thought process when I keep forgetting what day/time it is, but the most recent chapter is coming along fine. It's going to be a bit longer than the others, for some setup intended for a separate continuation, which I plan to be much shorter chapter-wise; but will be more dense :)

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Oct
14th
2018

Update #3 Time to Think · 2:37am Oct 14th, 2018

Story finally finished, a load of mental baggage laid to rest (which I'm ironically gonna have to write Daniel's method to alleviate his mental baggage, among other things), I'm left with a few things to ask those who may still be following, or new to reading the story. Specifically: It's very rough beginning... and middle... and parts leading into the end :twilightsheepish:

Should I restructure the beginning chapters and onward to a more sensible format, or leave it as is?

Also, to mention here, instead of making another blog post and another notification people will have to read: I'll be soon deleting 'FTL: Operation Restoration' following story posting site rules #3 and #7 , since I'm not sure where it lies when being rewritten.

Re-reading the story, I may have jumped the gun back then, and I'd rather not continue with how it is right now. Instead, telling it from different perspectives of the two main characters in a way that ties better into explaining how the painted universe they're in is related to Equestria, and their story derived from that. The path the story was going, would have only had tidbits of hints until a decisive explanation near the end, which I don't feel is fair to make people read that far into it. It did however, have many important events that I wish to keep in the rewritten version, and so they will be in it :)

Just letting people know as a courtesy, as it will be deleted sometime and eventually replaced.

I feel the need to ask again, because I'd really like feedback on this, if only for the ease of use for future readers that may stumble on this story and read it's jumbled beginning and be turned away from it.

Should I restructure the beginning chapters and onward to a more sensible format, or leave it as is?

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Comments ( 2 )

The next chapter is a big read! I'm going to savor it and read it this evening.

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Yeah, turned out longer than I anticipated by the time I finished it ^^; Packed a lot in, hope get around to reading it sometime!

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