Almost 100!!! An actual update too! · 1:54pm Sep 26th, 2018
My story almost has 100 likes!!
And its well over a 1,000 views!!
Thanks guys, this is actually like one of the only things I've ever made that garnered so much attention!! Not only that the statistics say its got over 400 some favorites!
It means a lot to me, really everyone thanks for enjoying my work enough to be interactive and eagerly wait for more~
Update of the Story: so things are going smoothly I've been talking to blackgreymon over steam and docs about the story and what he thinks of it. He says that he likes it but I worry I might be a bit dramatic when it comes to trying to soak up the feels of the scene.
Considering how it's only been like three days for Smiley, I dont wanna use up to much of her character problems so fast. So it may seem to others that she is repeating herself and keeps getting sad over the same reasons. However it's to reason that since Smiley is much of a blank slate, that these problems are much more glaring to her than others. (So please let me know if I'm being too much lol)
I have also developed a very hard style magic system for the Equestrian world, revolving around the concept of Hyper Space and Hyper State Energy. Which will be explained in Twilight's lessons, for those who dont care about lore dumps or reading about Twilight spending five hours lecturing Warm Smile I'll tell you when to skip but the magic system rules and laws will be followed from henceforth.
(for those who dont know it means that the magic system is very defined in its rules and laws, soft meaning the opposite example being Gandalf using magic to solve problems but never says how he does it)
Fleur Dis Les is going to be a main character, and a important role for Warm Smile's development as I mentioned in chapter four Fleur is considered Warm Smile's biological mother and will want to spend considerable time together with her.
If Pinkie seems a bit AU it is because she is, I've taken time to make her a 'real' person, a person who isnt just a cupcake wrapped in cotton candy. At the moment Pinkie believes Warm Smile needs stability and her jumping everywhere wouldn't help, she wants Smiley to genuinely smile because its what she needs. She can see and has heard from the pony herself about how she feels like she's floundering around not knowing what the hay is going on, she's been there and she knows that endless draining feeling of being in the rapids and no shore in sight.
Sunrise Beam is going to be a main character as well, while she might not be there to jump into action with Applejack against say like the bugbear or Discord she will be there for Applejack since they are a very close couple in this story. Something that if liked enough will be shown in bonus chapters or side stories of how they met and super cute things in the future. I've also been working on art of her so once she's finished I'll post her in the blog or my DA.
Scholastic Class is going to be another character that's going to pop up more mainly when Twilight is helping Warm Smile with her education and bringing her back up to speed. As well as some minor shifts in character history and past experiences.
example being that Fluttershy actually has a doctorate in Animal Health or that Rainbow Dash has a Bachelor's degree in Meteorology and a associate's in physical health. The mane six are well educated and talented in fields that they would naturally be interested in. Like the Arc Magi course Twilight is taking, she has a PhD in advanced mathematics which is required for the Arc Magi course.
Anyways enough of me rambling! I've got a whole world to create and share with you all!! Thanks so much for all the support you show by liking or just favoriting it! It means a lot~
Yours truly,
Purple Book Horse
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Whooot!
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Lol I know you are mate you've been telling me since the last update
Thanks for being a fan of it~
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Im going to just keep on saying that until you finish the next chapter lmao
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
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Depends on multiple factors, I've been writing more and more each day since my rut in the writers block so far I think I've written about 30 some pages? Maybe a bit more, but I tend to write about 100 150 pages for a chapter
Hopefully Pinkie and Smiley end up in a relationship in the future :)
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We'll have to see I am definitely for a Pinkie Pie and Smiley ship, the CMC are going to grow more once they get their cutie Mark's, so around probably sixth season which they should of been older looking at least.
I have this general idea for Smiley's cutie mark, but I'm torn between it being one about magic or friendship
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I'm leaning towards Smiley getting a cutie mark about magic to be honest considering how much she wants to do it.