Made Some Changes. (Story Chapter Update)

To those who are following my story "A Lunar Twist", I made changes at the end to the most recent chapter. I read my work, and the more I looked over it, I'll admit I went a might too dark for what I had meant to do. I was also battling a cold at the time I wrote it, so that may have had a promising factor in how I wrote the chapter originally.

I do hope that you who read the chapter originally will take another look and tell me what you think of the outcome. I plan to have another chapter out this weekend, but I can't make any set in stone promises. You know how the Military likes to be unpredictable at times. Please take a look and comment in the story's comment section what you thought of the chapter. Have a great coming weekend everypony, and I'll AH!!... AH!!!! CHOOO!!!!