Gonna do some fixing on MLP: A Lunar Twist · 5:11am Jul 21st, 2022
So, I've been debating this for a while, but I am going to be doing " a lot" of maintenance on my story, MLP: A Lunar Twist.
I'm still gonna have the whole angle of some human coming to Equestria angle, but, what I am gonna do, is change up how things are gonna play out on the arrival. My main character, Night Mist, will still know all the characters from the first 3 seasons, but, he will not know how he knows many of them, he won't reveal that he's not from the world, because the change up will be that he has no clue if he was from their world or not, and he won't know of the events that are supposed to play out before hand. Yes, Luna and Nightmare Moon will still be separated, and Sunset will still be in the Pony world, and Luna will be on the verge of adopting Night Mist. There just won't be the whole mind locking away, and such. I might give him the feeling of "something feels off, but can't name it", but that will be the result of him not knowing what had happened previously in the series.
So, for the time being, I will be unpublishing my chapters to do some heavy duty maintenance on the whole story. Give it a different angle. So Stand by, and don't freak out when you see that the chapters for "MLP: A Lunar Twist" are unaccessable.
Do what you feel is right. I for one will be sad to the original go, but look forward to the remake.
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Well, I'm not deleting it. Just changing some key things, like Night Mist losing his memory, aside from knowing ponies' names, his pony name, and not having any recollection of the series' events. Like I said before he'll possibly have an uneasy feeling about things as an event approaches, like a small hint of Pinkie Sense in a sense, but he'll not be recounting what he knew about the show to the Princesses. They won't have any idea what will happen.
I will also be changing the rating to mature, cause there will be mentions of things like breastfeeding, diapers, and Luna babying Night Mist a little, but it's not gonna be like he's a complete foal that needs bottles, a crib, high chairs and baby food and such. Just something for someone who's in a sort of toddler phase, and things that will allow Luna to bond with Night Mist in a special way.
I already made key changes to the first chapter if you want to read it.
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Glade to see the original is staying, and the remake is more realistic as for wanting to read it. I will as soon as I finish typing this.