Update: Changing Minds · 8:01am Jul 20th, 2018
Apologies for the lack of updates.
Writing the next chapter has proved difficult, as I'm trying to make the transition as seamless as possible without making it slog down with plot. However, I can promise that it will be done and posted within the week, so I must beg your patience. As for the rest of the story, I'd like a bit of input from the readers, mainly who you would like to be put on the block next and corrupted, as well as what way.
Reading through the comments, I noticed a few that people wanted.
- RD and her Parents
- RD and the wonderbolts
- Princess Twilight and Spike
MarshmallowRarity and Spike- Rarity as a high end courtesan
I confess, the last one piques my interest as it's not a straight ship, but I'd like to open it up to everyone. These aren't the only options, I'd like to know what you, the reader, would like to see in future chapters. It'll help me get motivated to show you the choices you made.
Thank you,
AlternativePerversion
Definitely think RD and the wonderbolts would be amusing, though her parents could be interesting as well considering they practically live for her.... it's just another way to be closer right? But seeing little montages of the wonderbolts shifting their 'locker room focus' to using RD just sounds awesome.
easily Marshmallow Pone as a high end courtesan!
Courtesan Rarity sounds fun.
I'm happy about the future update. I can't wait to read it when it is here.
As for want. I want
Rainbow being conditions to help get off all the wonderbolts
Rarity as a high end Courtesan
Pinkie hosting adult parties.
or Pinkie joining the cakes in a threesome, and maybe change things to an erotic bakery.
Maybe after the apples are conditioned, maybe have them both start to sell themselves. I think Mac and appleJack would fetch a good price.
Fluttershy..... She's a suberve model. I think she should embrace her sexiness, and become the local harot.
Maybe hypnotizes Cheerlie into practical sexual education teaching, both for foals to watch as along as there parents to participate.
Now the trick is with Spike and Twilight. While I would like them to become closer... I don't think it's enough....
Twilight should definatley get her own guards to have sex with, But maybe have her conditioned to have more pupils, well with a different kind of friendship..
As for Spike... I really want spike to come out of his shell. To go through a sort of lust growth, where he becomes a bit more crass, and when he gets in the mood, as a dragon, it is his right to have sex with who he wants when he wants.
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Before and after a show, Wonderbolts need to be clean, right? The best way to clean a cock is with an eager mouth, at least, that's what I've been told.
honestly, I'd like something about celestia and Luna (or Celestia and cadance^^) but I have a feeling that will be saved for the finale^^
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You can suggest it. I prefer to have this story be pushed by audience vote, and who they'd like to have corrupted and in which way. AJ and Big Mac were a suggestion from the previous story. So, if you want to see Celestia and Luna corrupted, state in what way and hopefully others will agree with you and I'll write that.
For example:
Luna the Dream Whore
Celestia the cumslut
Celestia and Luna Twincest
etc.
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CeLuna Twincest sound like fun^^ It could also be combined with Dream Whore. Like it starts with Luna going into Celestias dreams, but the dreams slowly change from just having a little chat to more and more sexual things until Luna submits and just gets fucked by Celly (and maybe a few other lucky souls in dreamland along the way). Then it starts bleeding into the waking world as well until they can barely keep their hands off each other.
It could go as far as them slowly warping their day and Night Courts into huge orgies or something. but that would be like a little extra for an Epilog or something^^
Spike and Small Marshmallow (Sweetie Belle).
Fluttershy "getting over" her shyness by being addicted to streaking.
Pinkie Pie turned into a marital aid for the Cakes.
Mayor Mare quietly changing decency laws.
Pinkie opening up a dating service, where customers are turned more and more into D/S freaks like the Apple siblings.