Herd Life Side Project. · 7:51pm Apr 19th, 2018
https://ramiras.deviantart.com/art/Night-536850590
Hello. I write this to let my readers have the opportunity to contribute on a certain side project I've been working on. I've been asked by some and I have agreed to edit Herd Life and release a version with the clop bits removed for none clop readers. I've already completed several chapters now and I'm about ready to start releasing the new version.
Here is what I am asking from you all. I've been thinking of a new name for this new version and I wanted some feedback as well as any ideas you might think of. Current ideas so far is- "Life in the Herd" "Life of the Herd" "Age of the Herds" "Herd Age"... Any others idea's are welcome and you can post them below.
Another thing I need help with is how much I need to change to make it suitable for general readers. The clop bits are a given, but I have other things like graphic depictions of births and nursing foals. I am inclined to leave most of these elements in, but some feedback would be most helpful.
Lastly. I am not very good at writing a story's synopsis and I think Herd Life needs a more updated and accurate version. If any of you wish to help with this, go ahead and post your ideas below as well.
Thank you. The link to the picture above is found just below the picture.
i think nursing bits can be left alone. it happens in nature and is fine. birthing, while in nature, is still graphic. leave it in, but maybe clean up a little? sorry, i've been reading 'don't underestimate me' lot, so im used to gore.
"Life of the Herd" is more fitting I think as the story is more about the other characters then Celestia. The description should mirror this with something like "ponykind's early beginnings" or something for the short one but the long one is fine according to me. I think nursing and birthing is ok as it is not really meant to be erotic but then some people are more prude then others. Go with the rules of the site if you intend to remove some tags I guess.
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Dawn of the Equestrian Age
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Okay.
Age of Herds sounds like Age of Empires, so go with AoH.
"Equestrian Age" ---my favorite so far
"Dawn of the Equestrian Age"
"Life of the Herd"
"Life in the Herd"
"Age of Herds"
"Ponykind's Early Beginnings"
"Herd Life SFW" (safe for work)
"Equestrian Rising"