Changes

I've gotten my first fic out there finally and it seems to be going well for the most part. I'm getting a chapter out at the most every five days, but I'm making a few mistakes with some of the story's details and the character designs that I'm going for. If you see something that doesn't add up to what I'm planning or see a grammar error. Give me a respectful comment about it and I'll do my best to fix it. I've made a few edits in the past three days that people suggested to me that go along with my original plan for the story and they seem to be doing well for the most part.