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AntiBronyBenSwolo


I might as well be the only Anti-Brony here. Anyway, I also like Star Wars :P. P.S. Tari is best Duck Nerd

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Mar
21st
2018

I need some help :P · 1:59am Mar 21st, 2018

Basically, I'm having This Story separated into different story arcs and those arcs would be summed up in a few chapters. The problem is, I can't think up of any story arcs at the moment. All I got so far is
1. Spark of War (I already finished that one)
2. Ruby in the Stars: where basically, the Pretty Brainless Businessmen team up with a small band to rescue a couple of Alien Prisoners from Twilight Sparkle causing Ghostbuster's identity at risk once more because everyone thinks he's dead and he'd like to keep it that way
3. Unknown Story Arc Title: In this one, Fluttershy and Ghostbuster see each other for the first time since the war started meanwhile,
there are new villains on the loose, and Fluttershy has noticed something strange about herself.

4. Legacy of the Jedi: After SuperFolder Ghostbuster rescues an old man from attackers, the old man takes Fluttershy in as his student so they could train in the ways of the Force together.
5. Strongest Stars: Fluttershy's teacher tasks SuperFolder with heading towards an abandoned Sith Temple where he'll find his destiny. Meanwhile, Discord makes an attempt to capture the Pretty Brainless Businessmen.
6. Skywalkers United: Ghostbuster and a Sith Ancestor team up with Fluttershy and her teacher to break into jail and save Fluttershy's real parents
7.Darth Edris: SuperFolder and Fluttershy find out that an ancient Sith Lord has been ruling Equestria for 3000 years, and they go off to tell everyone before confronting her. The final battle is here.

I'm not sure how I should edit these up in some way. Any ideas? Suggestions for arcs?

Comments ( 12 )

Why does your story say complete if you plan more?

4856836
Because I just changed it so that I'll separate it into different stories. I'm done with the first story arc as of now, and need to work on the other 6.

4856837
Here's an idea, which arc would make you the happiest?

4856838
I am unsure how to answer that. I think I know what you're getting at here, but there is the problem with it not being in chronological order.

4856842
What are you looking for in your writing? What subjects or topics that interest you?:rainbowderp:

4856849
I like adventure, mystery, action, and comedy.

4856853
Not just genres, specific subjects. Are you interested in a life of a person in a specific job? Having a certain personality. Specific social life like boyfriend/girlfriend, popular, someone having a crushed on others, being the dumb one, Addictions,? How about properties of situations, things, or phenomenon? How about subjects like history? Science? Engineering? Math? Politics? Art?

4856857
Hmmm....you do have a point there.

4856858
Ideas barely scratch the surface, there's the forming an idea into a fully fledged practical idea and execution of the idea (the concept and the premise). So don't get too hooked up on vague, amorphous thoughts that don't give substance

4856864
Just a question though: which of these story arcs is the most interesting?

4856866
I don't know these characters, but which of these characters have the most chemistry? And if this is your midpoint, I would pick a storyline that brings the characters in a low or the Antagonist at their peak, just for practice

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