TWhat It Means
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Adventure
A human from our world is sucked into a world of magic and fantasy, and goes on the adventure of a lifetime!
Sex
Gore
Violence
Anthro
Crossover
Human
OC
Daring Do
Self Insert
Dustchu · 65k words · 180 34 · 4.8k views

Can She Be Saved? - Blogpost for What it Means · 10:14pm Feb 19th, 2018

So... what's up with this blogpost? Well, I'm curious.

Also spoilers below for anyone who hasn't read the story.

What it Means, a project of mine that centers around the protagonist, Dee, and his journey throughout the world outside of Equestria. A different take on the standard HiE trope, in a way, it's not really a Human in Equestria story so much as it is a Human in the World of Ponies trope, he's not even anywhere close to Equestria.

I've been on and off working on this story since July 2017, now like many of you know of me by now, I never really plan heavily for stuff. I go with the flow of story writing and just see where it takes me, while I develop the plot and such within my head, usually works out.

Though for What it Means? I feel like I fucked up somehow.

I still have a loose idea of where it's going to go so I can end it, of course, that's not the problem. But I feel as if I may have fucked up some basic stuff when writing out the adventure's beginning.

Dee, our resident human who's starting off on his adventure after meeting Daring Do, met up with Blade Dancer and Sakura Petal, a beautiful and mysterious adventurer thestral and a young teenage earth pony mare who's run away from home. And together, they ventured eastward, where? No idea, they just followed Dee for whatever damn reason.

And... I'm not sure, but it feels like I goofed up something and any future chapter I do won't end up being as good as I'd like. I don't know, maybe I'm just second guessing my skill here again. So far, the story has actually done incredibly well and was actually featured one day. it's close to 2K views and has a pretty okay upvote to downvote ratio.

So... my question to you all, what do you think of the story so far? Is it good? Did you think I fucked up at all? Is there something wrong with it? I would appreciate some feedback or... something.

Thanks for reading and I look forward to reading whatever's posted.