My pacing. · 2:43am Jan 21st, 2018
Alright followers do you guys/gals think my pacing is too fast? Do I need to slow down? What are some things you think I could do to improve. I'm hoping to get feedback as I've worked really hard on my newest story Second Chances only for it to be denyed for a review due to pacing issues in the beginning so looking for any possible feedback on it.
Well it's good to start slow for it to build up in the climax if the story