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Nailah


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Jan
21st
2018

My pacing. · 2:43am Jan 21st, 2018

Alright followers do you guys/gals think my pacing is too fast? Do I need to slow down? What are some things you think I could do to improve. I'm hoping to get feedback as I've worked really hard on my newest story Second Chances only for it to be denyed for a review due to pacing issues in the beginning so looking for any possible feedback on it.

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Well it's good to start slow for it to build up in the climax if the story

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