She Wore A Yellow Ribbon - Rewrite

And Chapter 1 is out! I've rewritten chapter 1 of She Wore A Yellow Ribbon, and this time I didn't delete the old chapters in case you want to see how terrible they were before. I will keep them there, even though I intend to vastly change the story, just for historical purposes. It's good to see where you've come from, I believe. I also really wish I didn't delete the Girl I Left Behind Me one.
Anyway, as usual I hope you enjoy and if you're interested in being an editor, let me know. Thanks!