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  • TVoid Trials
    In a futuristic Equestria, a young earth pony struggles to get herself a job within a space colony. Can Shetland surpass dangers and her own mothers disapproval to join the Voidmarines?
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Jan
1st
2018

New year bloggl · 8:37pm Jan 1st, 2018

well, 2017 was... something. It's hard to believe that it's been just over a year since I've put up my first story on fimfiction. I wouldnt say I was very successful, far from it, but I did something, and even made new friends, like the author of The Iron Horse, my favorite fanfiction (except Fallout: Equestria) TheHatman. And the guy who illustrated his work, Greenfinger.

Wait, I'm certain there was a point to this- OH, YEAH.

Void Trials!

So, it's been... like half a goddamn year since I've put up the final chapter of Void Trials 1 and promised 2 sequels. Thats... not whats gonna happen and I will explain it right now. There are two things that soon began to bug me about the plan. Number 1: I felt less and less like I wanted to do 2 more multi-chapter stories with Shetland. Don't get me wrong, it's not that I don't enjoy writing these, but I have many, many other stories in my head, all of which I have to pass up because I took up a big project like this.

And yes, for me, Void Trials is a pretty large project, scoff all you want, show up and tell me how long your story is compared to mine-

Reason 2: the third part of Void Trials would have been a complete and utter edgefest with few lighter moments strewn inbetween. In essence, Shetland would have gone to a murderous wasteland a la Fallout, where she'd try to hunt down a specific guy and not care at all who gets in the crossfire. Without context, that sounds really shitty. With context I didn't think it would be, but I don't think I can pull it off.

Now, whats coming instead?

I managed to rearrange the plotpoints into 1 sequel, that incorporates everything I set up in Void Trials 1, makes a good story by itself and that I bet you wouldnt even notice was cobbled together from the pieces of a different idea if I hadn't just told you. Alltogether, it will be somewhat less dark, deal with the consequences of the events in Void Trials 1 while incorporating more of what worked in that story instead of focusing on what didn't really work out too well. It took a while to rearrange and connect the dots however and I only have 2 chapters saved up in Google doc and a few blank spots left in the plans. However, the wait will not be much longer, and I promise, cross my heart and hope to fly, that the first chapter will go up this month, probably not within the next week though.

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Hey, thanks for the kind words. And it's been nice hanging out with you too. :twilightsmile:

Anyway, good luck with Void Trials. It sounds like you've got a good grasp on how to proceed from here. I look forward to seeing how it turns out!

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