When romance and porn become all too real.

As a lot of you probably know I've been on quite a roll with Second Time Around I really felt the whole Rarity learning about herself and Mayes overcoming his own hurt turned anger. What was supposed to be a shorter "Hey I think I like you after all lets fuck" has become sad and for me, all too real. The next chapter (Appropriately called "Animals") Is actually hard for me to write because it delves into a sub genre I am not too familiar with and have purposely stayed away from.

Sadness and Tragedy.

Don't get me wrong. Man gets the mare in the end but I think the smut will be made even better by actual character development like so many other stories I am enjoying.

Dang. Well on the other hand BIE gets an adventuress chapter including demons, magic, and Celestias sweet as hell mouth.

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[Starbreon]

I love stories that explore these themes because it makes the resolution all the better