Soon... *evil face* · 8:51am Oct 20th, 2012
Okay, so the next chapter of The Piano Man will be published either tonight, or at some point tomorrow. (It's 9:46 PM for me right now) So I think that's something to look forward to...
In the meantime, I want some honest opinions: How are you all liking the story so far? Is there anything you think would make it better, or anything that dissatisfies you? I'd also like to hear about aspects you happen to like in particular, if you have the time. Constructive criticism (and praise, if such a thing exists) is always welcome.
Reader feedback is important. Always write what you want to write, but if you can tweak your stories here-and-there so that others will enjoy it more, (Or revise chapters if they're universally panned) I'd recommend doing that too.
Also: Progress on my new story is coming along nicely. The first chapter weighs in at a meaty 8,000 words. If you'd like to do a little error-hunting, then shoot me a PM!
"Man, I don't even have an opinion."
Do whatever you think is right, I can wait.
In my overall opinion, I find your story to be very entertaining keeping the
reader in a state of wanting more
I find the story magnificent ,even though you had
To edit that one chapter, I still really enjoy your story
I cant express the amount of win in your story in any form of coherent language.
So just keep doing exactly what your doing.
Have fun.
It's been OK...
However there seems to be a sad lack of plot...Not that kind
, but the kind that makes stories fun to read.
So far it seems like all that's been happening has been "Key's (not-so) Amazing Adventures in Equestria!"
(I say "not so" due to the fact that he hasn't left the castle in like 4 or 5 chapters.)
I want to love this fic, I REALLY do. But I just can't yet. Piano man is so much better. This fic has just been getting fillers and fillers, I think it's due to this "secret project" you're working on.
If you're having a case of writer's block I would be happy to 'Jump-start your brain".
Also there have been things that have confused me to no end...the dream... my reaction was like this:
I had no idea what was going on or why. Feel free to point and laugh if, I missed something, but at that point and still today I'm confused and a bit frustrated.
I saw him argue with someone then them end up dead 15 minutes later..My question is why? Is this like a bad case of survivor's guilt or something?
It's just disappointing. When we actually see some plot (God! That looks SO wrong!) I will be happy to announce I enjoy the fic.
Hmmm...according to your profile page of doom you are in New Zealand? Hello from the Midwestern USA! Though when I write this I think it's like 4:00AM for you...
What I like about the story is the unique twist on the usual HiE stuff. Not many stories where the guy goes to Equestria, gets the crap tortured out of him, and then has positive interactions with cute ponies. It's always nice to see each author's perspective. Though what I don't like is...well...it's been progressing pretty slowly. Not much has happened. Also, though the edits make it better, Chapter 13 still rustles my jimmies somewhat. It's fine though.
Right now I can't think of anything. How the story is now, you do well in keeping my attention.
Ergh... I haven't been checking this story as often, but i don't really have anything to say.
Whatever you think would be entertaining! You've kept me wanting more since I started reading it a few weeks ago
I'm really digging your story right now, the only thing that would make it better for me would be for slightly longer chapters. After reading one of your chapters I feel like I just ate a fun sized candy bar, delicious but it leaves me wanting more. That's not really a complaint though as I wouldn't want the flow of your story to be messed up simply to add more words so keep up the good work.
So far the story seems to be going well through my eyes. There really isn't anything I can find that's seriously wrong with it.