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Viper Pit


im not the best writer but I'm proud of every story I make some more then others tho Also I would love to do crossover's they are so much fun

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  • 135 weeks
    apologies

    I'm sorry for the lack of updates but I been struggling with severe writer's block and I can't seem to break free of it. I can get little burst of inspiration here and there but nothing that truley gets me out of the rut. I hate this feeling and it sucks


    bunny

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  • 160 weeks
    good news bad news

    The good news that I am writing again but it is slow going and it will take time for me to get everything were I want it story wise before any story updates happen.

    Read More

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  • 174 weeks
    Terrible news

    So i just got a phone call that i been dreading. My grandpa is dead so this maybe the straw that breaks the cammels back for writing for me personally

    17 comments · 301 views
  • 190 weeks
    Sorry

    I'm sorry for the lack of updates on my stories but things in my life have been stressful. What with the beer virus, and the recent divorce of my parents caused by my dad cheating on my mom and the fall out that happened with that whole mess. I just haven't had the time Nor energy to write. I don't plan on quitting but I will be on writing hiatus for a while until things in my life cool off. I am

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  • 202 weeks
    Random dream

    So I had this dream were ratatosker (Norse squirrel god) and janus (romen god of portals and transitions) went to Equastria to have tea with Abraham Hamster.

    I dunno why I'm posting this but I felt like I had to

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Dec
2nd
2017

my new species and a new Challenge · 3:53am Dec 2nd, 2017

I have made a new species when I made my oc with the help of a few of my friends I have found a name for said species they are called Scorpiuus or the Savannah wonder's they live in plains and Savannah's and are enemies of the changelings. Each gender has there own things to help them survival as a whole. Example the females are smarter and can launch magical missiles out of there tail. while the males are bigger more durable and are resistant to magic. Both have have deadly venom in there tail's, restore magic from extracting/absorbing it from changelings and can cover a wide area(about the size of a basket ball course) in magic that will poison anything that's not one of there kind. It last about 5 minutes. The poison form their magic can not kill you and has the benifit of giving you tempary immunity to the venom in there tail's it will wear off once you go to sleep but you will be weaker for a while. The antidote for both is peaches. It is believed that the reason for this is so they can harvest the more magic over a greater period of time not capable of earning cutie markes They are nomadic and travel in groups of about 5 to 10

As you can see I put a lot of thought into this species so I have a challenge for you make your own species list there habitats strengthens and weakness natural enemies and allies as well if they are capable of using magic or not if so what kind. so if you take the challenge I will pick my favorite's and put them in a story. all idea's welcomed how ever there is a catch if no one make's anything no one wins

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i got a serious question can it effect robots or um gods

4739943
gods are okay but robot's are out cant posion steel types

4739944
yes i got robot oc woohoo but he's good

4739943
any other questions?

4739954
okay you doing the challenge?

4739956
nah was just asking a question

I don't know why, but this species sounds vaguely familiar to the Bountos from the Bounto filler Bleach arc. But if someone wanted to enter the challenge, then how does one go about entering?

4739973
simple post your species here or pm me it

4739981
Thanks for telling me, I'll probably have it by tomorrow.

4739982
np I just hope more people except the challenge cause winner's by default are not true winner's i mean they still win but it's not the same

4739985
Just givenit a day or two and you'll have a fair enough entries, considering you have over 40 followers, so just be a little patient and people will come.

4740005
well the challenges i do dont really expire if you wanted to you could do the first challenge I well challenged and write a story inspired by a song

4740007
I'll certainly check it out.

4740010
I look forward to it

Okay, so this is the species I came up with. The name of the species is Akuma no Me (Japanese for Demon's Eye), they look a lot like a pony, but the distinguishing factors are their eye, the Akume no Me, which gives the sclera a black color, their iris a red color, and the pupil pure white, and their demon-like horns protruding from the forehead. And this is a list of their abilities.

1: Akuma no Chikaku (Japanese for Demon's Perception) This ability slows the user's perception of time, allowing them to react to an attack way faster than a normal pony.

2: Akuma no Sakushi (Japanese for Demon's Illusion) This ability allows the user to manipulates the magic in the victim and messes with the victim's senses, making the victim think whatever the user wants them to, similar to an illusion.

3: Akuma no Rupu (Japanese for Demon's Loop) This ability allows the user to place a victim in an infinite loop of events forever, this ability is very versatile since the spell will not go away, even if the user dies.

4: Shinka Shita Akuma no Me (Japanese for Evolved Demon's Eye) When an Akuma evolves their Akuma no Me, they will unlock two unique abilities specific to them, but one ability that is shared among the Akuma no Me species is that they will obtain something called a Puppet, this Puppet will be a physical manifestation of the Akuma's magic in a special item or weapon, and they can call upon this weapon with a certain phrase such as "Release" or "Open" followed up by the Puppet's name.

5: Akuma no Gappei (Japanese for Demon's Merging) When a member of this species merges with his or her Puppet, they will unlock the absolute pinnacle of their magical capability.

6: Akuma no Gado (Japanese for Demon's Guard) This ability is a physical manifestation of the user's magic into the form of an anthropomorphic animal such as Manticores, Dragons, Timberwolves, etc. This state also has many evolved forms that are too much to list here.

Now, this species may be very powerful, but they have a few weaknesses that may seem trivial at first glance, but they are very consequential.

The first weakness is that if a member of the species uses the Shinkai Akuma no Me for an extended period of time without a break, they will go blind, the range where the Akuma will go blind after an extended amount of time is about 3 hours or more. Another weakness is that if a Akuma uses the Akuma no Rupu, then they will go blind in the eye they use to cast the spell immediately, and the spell can be broken if the victim knows who they are, so if you used it against someone like Rainbow Dash, it wouldn't work, since she already knows what she wants to be in life. A weakness regarding the Akuma no Gado is that when used for the first time, the user will experience excruciating pain all over their body. Two weaknesses regarding the Akuma's Puppet is that if the Akuma is not yet ready, the Puppet will take over his soul and kill him, and the same can be said if an Akuma merges with their Puppet.

4740351
that is very well thought out if I had to grip you didnt put any behavioral patterns like what provokes them into attacking

4740355
I just realized that. Well, most of them are nomadic, they'll leave the village the species lives in deep within the North, far beyond the Crystal Empire, once they reach the age of 18. And they can't exactly use the Akuma no Me, or any of the abilities that come with it, right off the bat, the Akuma no Me needs to be triggered by an extreme emotion, whether it be anger, happiness, sadness, desperation, etc. The species will sometime refer to themselves as a clan, and they're mostly calm, only a few will have a very extroverted personality, they also prefer to be alone most of the time when they travel.

4740358
so basiclly pinkie pie would get them all to act like a swarm of hornets

4740361
i like them alot might be difficult to put into the story I have in mind bu I think I could make it work Assuming you want them in a story to begin with

4740379
Do as you please, if you feel like you can't stuff it all in one story, then that's fine, you don't have too, I just wanted to share my ideas with you.

4740381
Feel free to use the one I created if you wish.

4745495
almost limetless tho the power powerful the thing is the bigger the weakness has to be for balance reasons tho there are a few more criteria but thats it for the most part

4745500
okay but be sure to list what i initially wanted which is in the blog

4745551
i know im just pokin fun

4745573
sounds pretty epic and nice word choice i think i may use this one

4745576
well its a pretty good fit for rarity tbh

This is indeed quite interesting. I assume this means they live in the badlands. I do have some questions I thought I would ask.
1) How do they interact with the new changelings that occured when Thorax became their ruler and the species changed?
2) How do they deal with the Maulwurf, which I presume are also native to the badlands.
3) What is their culture like, I mean we know its nomadic, but do they use tents, dig holes to sleep in, or live in caves? Do they have a written language?

Sorry for all the questions. I'm quite curious. :twilightsheepish:

4797275
no worries ask away
1 they can't find thoraxes hive because they use stolen love to track their prey as it smells like burnt sugar to them

2 they don't really interact with the malwurf because they keep roaming but when the interactions do happen they just basically walk away from it

3 they just sleep on the ground no digging or caves unless its raining. and they don't have a written language that outsiders know of because they more often then not shoo outsiders away because when your prey shape shifts you learn to be wary of everything

4797275
anymore questions?

4797302 Maybe at some point. I have to think of a few more first.

I guess I do have a few more question.

1) What do the Scorpiuus think of the Princesses (specifically Celestia and Luna)?
2) Are they even aware of the Princesses and their roles?
3) Do they only feed on stolen love, or do they have some other food source?
4) Do they have leadership roles in their communities?
5) Aside from being different are their any other reasons they have isolated themselves away from the other pony tribes?

4797307
1& 2 no they are not aware of the princess roles and if they where I doubt they would care about them

3 they have other food sources they just need the stolen love to replenish their magic

4 strongest male and smartest female are the leaders and more often then not regularly challenge others to keep their skills up to par

5 yea they have a nasty habbit of of over doing it. let me explain lets say two foals are playing one is a Scorpiuus and one is a earth pony and they start fighting over who the best power pony is and do to the scorpiuus nature of strong better they may out right kill the foal to prove that thier favorite power pony is better. bonus fact about half of their young don't live to thier first birthday because of this

4797307
got more questions because I am more then happy to answer them

Count me in! Let's have some payback for abducting my friends (the Mane 6)!

and their height, are they all tall as the common pony or a full grown alicorn like Celestia?

4842106
the males are the size of your average pony while the females are half that

4842108
so you mean females are a bit taller than fillies?

4842110
yes but that doesn't mean you should take them lightly

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