MA Heros's Sacrifice for the Elements
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Comedy
Tragedy
This is a story about Naruto waking up eaons after him being sealed away waking up and, coping with losing not only his family and his whole world but, having to adapt to a world populated by pacifist pastille colored horses. without losing his mind.
Gore
Crossover
Human
Celestia
Luna
Derpy
Main 6
CMCs
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Hey My Dudes!

I know I sound like a prude when i type but i just want you to know that i am not at all. I'm pretty chill when you get to know me.
I am just trying to be a little professional when i type so i cover all my bases, as not to step on anyone's toes. Being new to this site is a little bit intimidating that's all.
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I have an editor.

thank you all for your helpful advice.
I have an editor. his name is
XIII Hearts
thank you man for everything I hope we can continue to work well with each other.
thank you for being my editor I really appreciate everything
thank you, you beautiful person.
V.S.
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Looking for an editor

Hello i am looking for an editor that can be a little patient with me as i type slowly have bad grammer and bad pacing. this is my first story i would appreciate constructive criticism and or help of any kind .i am trying my very hardest to make my first fic A Hero's sacrifice for the Elements.
thank you to whoever takes the time to help me.
with thanks
V.S.
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Nov

12th

2017

Hey My Dudes! · 8:09pm Nov 12th, 2017

I know I sound like a prude when i type but i just want you to know that i am not at all. I'm pretty chill when you get to know me.

I am just trying to be a little professional when i type so i cover all my bases, as not to step on anyone's toes. Being new to this site is a little bit intimidating that's all.

I just want you to know I am very grateful for all of you taking time out of your life to read my fic that i am trying so hard on. Also commenting would be appreciated but, please no hatred.

Trying to be classy is hard and I am probably failing at it. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely

V.S.

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