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  • 327 weeks
    Re Write of Chapter 6

    Rewrite of chapter 6 … more like revamp i am having a writer's block and i'm not satisfied with how this chapter is turning out i was abou 7000 words in and read it again and it was stale and stilted as well as forced it had no flow to anyone willing to give me pointers on how to make a scene pop i would be more than willing to listen.

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  • 338 weeks
    Hey My Dudes!

    I know I sound like a prude when i type but i just want you to know that i am not at all. I'm pretty chill when you get to know me.

    I am just trying to be a little professional when i type so i cover all my bases, as not to step on anyone's toes. Being new to this site is a little bit intimidating that's all.

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  • 338 weeks
    I have an editor.

    thank you all for your helpful advice.

    I have an editor. his name is

    XIII Hearts

    thank you man for everything I hope we can continue to work well with each other.

    thank you for being my editor I really appreciate everything

    thank you, you beautiful person.

    V.S.

    1 comments · 237 views
  • 338 weeks
    Looking for an editor

    Hello i am looking for an editor that can be a little patient with me as i type slowly have bad grammer and bad pacing. this is my first story i would appreciate constructive criticism and or help of any kind .i am trying my very hardest to make my first fic A Hero's sacrifice for the Elements.

    thank you to whoever takes the time to help me.

    with thanks

    V.S.

    7 comments · 273 views
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Looking for an editor · 11:30pm Nov 10th, 2017

Hello i am looking for an editor that can be a little patient with me as i type slowly have bad grammer and bad pacing. this is my first story i would appreciate constructive criticism and or help of any kind .i am trying my very hardest to make my first fic A Hero's sacrifice for the Elements.

thank you to whoever takes the time to help me.

with thanks

V.S.

Comments ( 7 )

might help to post this as a thread in both a naurto group here and a edtiors group. love it so far by the way.

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thank you like i said i am trying but i hear editors are't that nice. i am new to this site and i type slow and i really dont want to have a "ball buster" for screwing something up thank you for the complement by the way got a lot of stuff planed in the futer for this fic so stay tune

love ya thank ya

V.S.

4722854
that is why you screen them. if they are mean just to be mean don ask them for help. the ones who ask nice questions are the keepers.

4722854
thing is your pacing doesnt need as much work as you think.

4722857
thank you that you think my pacing is't completely bad means a lot to me. by the by could you point me in the general direction of a "not mean just to be mean" editor?

thank you for your time.

V.S.

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also wicked kurama pic

4722867
thanks. im trying to set up a fic to star ethier him or someone displaced as him.

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