Rewrite of chapter 6 … more like revamp i am having a writer's block and i'm not satisfied with how this chapter is turning out i was abou 7000 words in and read it again and it was stale and stilted as well as forced it had no flow to anyone willing to give me pointers on how to make a scene pop i would be more than willing to listen.

To summarize the chapter so far which is not much in reality so here we go.

Read More

I know I sound like a prude when i type but i just want you to know that i am not at all. I'm pretty chill when you get to know me.

I am just trying to be a little professional when i type so i cover all my bases, as not to step on anyone's toes. Being new to this site is a little bit intimidating that's all.

Read More

thank you all for your helpful advice.

I have an editor. his name is

XIII Hearts

thank you man for everything I hope we can continue to work well with each other.

thank you for being my editor I really appreciate everything

thank you, you beautiful person.

V.S.

Hello i am looking for an editor that can be a little patient with me as i type slowly have bad grammer and bad pacing. this is my first story i would appreciate constructive criticism and or help of any kind .i am trying my very hardest to make my first fic A Hero's sacrifice for the Elements.

thank you to whoever takes the time to help me.

with thanks

V.S.