Don't You Hate It When You Post The Wrong Draft And Everyone Reads That Instead? · 7:19pm Nov 6th, 2017
Fig. 1. Me right now. Internal screaming not shown.
So apparently, during a little editing shtick, I messed up the arrangement of drafts for the story On The Transience Of Adelasters, which I've only found out about it after reading it up again on FimFic for referential stuff.
Summing up the changes from the last draft, it basically had a few grammatical clean-ups here and there (with more probably on the way when I can weed them out) , but there's an extra addition to the scene towards the end with a short paragraph where while Octavia comforts Vinyl after her encounter with the Adelaster, she gives her a kiss.
So yeah, doesn't change the ending of it at all, but it does give it a bit more 'oomph' than before. I've corrected it and triple-checked it to make sure the paragraph's there... (checks it the fourth time)... and yes, it's there.
Just another good day, I told myself this morning. Ah well, it's pretty nice to have a good ol' rustle every now and then.
Signing off!