KOTD Chapters 10-11 done · 8:44am Oct 21st, 2017
I told myself I'd do three chapters tonight, but the very next chapter was a longer one. For the most part, there was just some clarification and formatting issues. As usual, I found any reason I could to cut down on the "I did this" and "I did that"s.
I spruced up some details, but there wasn't much I wanted to add honestly. There's this wonderful thing called Writer's Bias, where I already know what's being portrayed, so it makes it difficult to tell if the description accomplishes that. It's not until you re-read that you see any mistakes. There were also times where I assumed the reader would know, but after re-reading it, it doesn't quite feel that way.