REV. 1: Oh, For The Love Of... · 11:50pm Sep 14th, 2017
Welcome back! Today we have my first review: "Oh, For The Love Of..."
Name: Oh, For The Love Of...
Written by: StoryEdge
Short description: The CMC cause havoc in Ponyville on a regular basis. One day Twilight gets a bit fed up with waiting for them to discover what's been staring them in the face this whole time. Quick one-shot written long before Crusaders of the Lost Mark.
Long description: The CMC cause havoc in Ponyville on a regular basis. One day Twilight gets a bit fed up with waiting for them to discover what's been staring them in the face this whole time. Quick one-shot written long before Crusaders of the Lost Mark.
Tags: #Comedy, #Random, #Slice of Life
Characters: Twilight Sparkle, Cutie Mark Crusaders
Rated: Everyone
Word count: 1,024 words
Review:
Okay, so first off, I did enjoy this story. It's a nice little one-shot, and perfect for the kind of people who don't want to read a ten chapter story and is looking for something fun. It's only 1,024 words, and it does not take long to read.
A few lines were a little "meh" and a few run on sentences, but y'know, whatever. It's not a The Abyss story where everypony enjoys it, or a Forthwith story where everything is perfectly edited.
I personally enjoyed this story, and I suggest it to you, my loyal "Sketchy Pies!" Have a great day, and be sure to read this story!
-Pinkie Pie
-Sketchy Clouds
