My First Shot At Audio Readings · 7:24am Aug 1st, 2017
Hi everyone.
I've been trying to get the hang of audio readings for a while and I finally managed to piece something together.
The Rummy Business of Old Blooey by Cloud Wander
I'm a huge PG Wodehouse fan and I've been practicing my impressions of Hugh Laurie and Stephen Fry (For anyone who doesn't know, they stared as Jeeves and Wooster in a TV Series. It's worth a watch)
Let me know what you think.
I might take this further.
Well, it's pretty first good for your first try. You're very good in empathize a person and situtation. And good Emphasis on the words
I Love the accent!
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That's genuine.
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Awesom!
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I picked up from watching WAAAAAY too much Hugh Laurie and Stephen Fry.
They performed together as Jeeves and Wooster, what this fic was based off.
It's okay. I don't expect a lot from novices, to put it nicely.
I don't mind the accent, and the creative touch to it, including the boomy audio. On the other hand, I noticed the vocals feel forced, like it's not a genuine conversation despite being dialogue heavy. There are times when I feel like it should slow down, but it just keeps going on, there is no proper pause and because of that, the audio, despite it's jumpy beat feels monotone (rhythm). You should make it sound like the character is thinking, when the character's thoughts appear.
On the flip side the audio is very vibrant, it has good scripting and a good concept.
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Okay, thanks. I'll keep that in mind.