Review of "Antagonists Anonymous," by All Art is Quite Useless. {Part 2}

On to part 2!

"I am not worthy of that," Tirek replied, bashful, eyes downcast.

How long has he been attending these meetings for him to act so submissive?

Discord leaned in, gazing directly at Fleur. "Is that really who you are, dear, or is that your title and reputation speaking? In this setting, we aren't chaos lords or dethroned queens, we are all equals, speak as one."

I don’t know why she thought giving him that spiel would work in the first place, considering he is nigh-omnipotent.

By now, it was difficult to tell whether Fleur was seething with anger or completely embarrassed, either way she was barely moving, eyes trained on Minuette, face beginning to burn red.

I feel like the section that’s underlined should read as “complete embarrassment.”

While that might have been a silly and hysterical reaction on my part, you should have at least attempted to convince me to stay.

Even though I think Minuette is in the right here, I don’t feel like they’re in the right crowd for this kind of problem. This is medical malpractice vs. world domination. The absurdity of it is both funny and strange to me.

"What, so I just give you a hand out for potentially disfiguring service? What kind of imbecile do you take me for?!"

This is pretty nitpicky, but shouldn’t it be a “hoof out”?

Not only did you almost take that away from me, Fancy Pants might not have even looked at me any more, had my face been ruined! Don't you see what your actions could have resulted in?

If your marriage is based off of primarily how you look, then you have a shitty marriage.

After roughly thirty visits, she assured me that if I were to attempt to find peace and better myself, she would work to absolve me of my sins, and allow me to live a truly happy life, away from the allure of power.

That answers my earlier question, around three-dozen times. That seems fairly reasonable, especially for a demon from Hell.

I've never had any one else treat me as a pony before." Chrysalis alluded.

* anyone

Also, I think the quote ending with a comma is probably more fitting, I think.

"Undoubtedly, if you'll have me under your table again."

Well, I’m glad to see they resolved their differences, even though I was on Minuette’s side the whole time. Maybe I’m just bias or something.

Somewhere in Canterlot's royal palace, Celestia was receiving a hoof massage, silently commending her success in diverting any minor squabbles away from her courtrooms, and directly towards Discord. She briefly considered giving him a raise, before realising that he could quite possibly materialise bits from thin air.

As if Celestia knew how to deal with anything other than minor squabbles in her courtroom.

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I think this just about does it! What a fun little story for me to read. Even though it took a long time to finally finish it, I’m glad I did. If you want to check out more of AAIQU’s work, be sure to check out the link that I’ll leave in this review.

‘Till next time!

Also, happy 4th of July!