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Arctikfox


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  • 3 weeks
    Story Ending

    Hi! It's been quite a while and for the longest while I have REALLY wanted to do a rewrite or to continue, but tonight in my further development of my IRL dnd campaign and the reading of comments on the story that I'm sorry to say have severely neglected I regret to say that this story is now a part of my history and no longer part of my identity. I have accepted much responsibility irl as an

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  • 320 weeks
    Murky Water

    Okay, chapter is up and should be somewhat fixed. The edits seem to have stayed which means im going on to the next chapter which should be out in the next day or 2, it's a beefy one so I gotta go over it a couple times. This way Skyfall comes back and the arc's finale will move into full swing. Then, the next arc.

    This is just a blog giving yall an update :ajsmug:

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  • 324 weeks
    So, end of the line, kinda~

    I've been quiet for the past few months so I figure it's time to at least say something. I'll try to get right down to the point and not bore you with needless stuff. I'm still interested in my stories and the show itself, but it's my interest in the fandom that's nearly gone.

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  • 335 weeks
    Dealing With Snakes in Spades

    Pointless rant incoming

    (Shattered Skies chapter releases wednesday, the need to know releases a week from wednesday)

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  • 335 weeks
    The Hanged Man

    Not an overly important blog

    I pay attention to what you all say in the comments and after this last chapter I have seen some concern regarding the ending of chapter 46.

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Jun
30th
2017

(SS) Love and Its Breeds · 1:53am Jun 30th, 2017

Love and Its Breeds

*Possible cursing, crude speech and suggestive situations for characters in Shattered Skies
Also spoilers*
Who am I kidding, that's too funny not to ignore

So, I was sitting in traffic today, bored, watching people toe the speed limit and this is usually when I think of Shattered Skies. I further develop things that may not be up to par. I once again rounded back to love and the different kinds in the story. I came home and dressed out to run and fell deeper into thought.

Skyfall is a little shit to some of the characters. I love it, but I was reviewing how I set up each of the relationships and just wanted to put it down in words for everyone. It's no mystery that I'm going slow and trying to make things count. The relationships that Skyfall has or will get into are attempted realistically. Or as real as magical cartoon ponies can get.

Each of these are just thoughts and with an evolving story, some characters may change or not. Just accept this like you would if it were a docudrama. Facts in how they are, but romanticized.

Fluttershy and Skyfall dated briefly and they do what couples do behind closed doors. I try to explain my story without cursing, but that doesn't soften what actually happens. It'll come out in the story in detail, but they may or may not have done the dirty and it may or may not be a point of contention. Spirits fall to the whims of lust as do the rest of... humanity? Yeah, let's go with that.

Skyfall has different levels of love for the others, but in mostly different ways. Twilight is pesky and he plays with her and enjoys it, even if she doesn't. Rarity, I feel, holds Skyfall as an object of a misguided Mcguffin in a way. I show bits and pieces where she is fond of him, then flip flops at times. A relationship between them would only ever be physical as I believe Rarity is too boutique driven to love who Skyfall is and that isnt even including Skies.

I've read many stories on the site, which prompted me to start writing, and in them I almost always read relationships where the characters were having sex up and down the walls the instant they got home, on the counter, on the sofa, in the shower, on camera all the time saying it wasn't me. Yes, those are lyrics. I mean, it's not super crazy to read a story and the characters have a physical relationship, sometimes that happens. one or both parties only want to acts and none of the romance. But it gets old. Many of the written relationships in stories only exist to justify the sex.

Skyfall and Fluttershy were like that in a way. They liked each other but the love was weak. I'm not really a clop writer so I haven't written that scene, it was one of those "So that happened" things. Starts out drinking tea, then washing the dishes, an offer to help wash, then accidental hoof touching, a kiss, then the above stated lyrics.

Other love is like the quiet love Applejack and Skyfall share. A familial love. Since Big Mac left, Skyfall helps out and has taken her under his wing to teach her like she were a daughter or a niece. I've long thought Applejack would be the best fit for Skyfall. There's no doubt in my mind that they would live happily. However, they wouldn't. Skyfall has secrets, that's who he is. Applejack can handle that he has mysteries in his life, but Skyfall lies at times and that would get between them, so he would have to change for her as she would have to for him.

Rainbow Dash is a prime example of unrequited love. Funnily enough, I have the most experience with this. I knew someone years ago who was just like Rainbow Dash, even down to speech. Love was only ever one-sided. So I turned it into a story device. Skyfall is no stranger to love and he knows when someone wants another for the "I conquered them" feeling. Pony and human Rainbow Dash aren't the same and so far I've had a blast writing Skyfall's and Rainbow's interactions.

Pinkie Pie is difficult. The only thing I can really put into words there is she trusts him enough to be herself around him.

Many of the others are self explanatory. Cadance is his daughter so it's unconditional and Luna is near daughter status after being his student and knowing eachother for so long. Shattered hates to admit it, but he likes the father status. Which comes into play later when certain things unfold. Vagguuuue.

Sunset Shimmer. In my strict opinion, one of the best characters in cartoons (not including anime.) She is trying to redeem herself and stay redeemed and not fall down a dark path. She is in a unique spot in the story, she was born in Equestria so she knows all the biases and stories, but has lived in the human world outside of continued influence.

And now it's late. I'll try and get stuff like this out more, it's nice to write about it :heart:

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Sunset Shimmer. In my strict opinion, one of the best characters in cartoons (not including anime.) She is trying to redeem herself and stay redeemed and not fall down a dark path. She is in a unique spot in the story, she was born in Equestria so she knows all the biases and stories, but has lived in the human world outside of continued influence.

I notice that unlike all your other examples, you didn't actually describe the nature of her relationship to Skyfall. Instead, you simply gave us your thoughts on her as a character, despite the fact that relationships are the obvious theme of this blog post. Was this intentional, or an oversight?:trixieshiftleft:

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Completely and utterly intentional. :raritywink: The others for the most part have been described and only have development to show in stride whereas Sunset and Sky's has only been hinted at or hidden altogether, save the dance they shared. I like how it's written so far in the unreleased chapters so Id like to save that discussion until later.

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Alright, I can understand that. Although... I for one would be more than pleased if they got together, it's been my other top Skyfall ship ever since the aforementioned dance.:rainbowkiss:

Skyfall and Fluttershy were like that in a way. They liked each other but the love was weak. I'm not really a clop writer so I haven't written that scene, it was one of those "So that happened" things. Starts out drinking tea, then washing the dishes, an offer to help wash, then accidental hoof touching, a kiss, then the above stated lyrics.

You have covered it so well, that I haven't even noticed when it happen. Can you point a chapter where it happen?

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It's a between chapter event. So between chapters 33-34-ish. I have a slightly sad moment in my headcanon regarding their love scene where they bang but they arent together yet. But again, I'm not a clop writer and opted to omit the scene since it didnt hurt anything.

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Well, I think I must believe you on your word, because I can't find it or understand the subtle meening from words.

Skyfall is no stranger to love

He knows the rules and does she. A full commitment's what he's thinking of. She wouldn't get that from any other guy.

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