Slight edit · 5:07am Jun 25th, 2017
Lots of new readers (at least to my stuff) might not realize that I write my stories quickly and don't have pre-readers/editors.
I do plan extensively ahead, but the speed I have been writing this particular story (Not Twilight's Problem) has led me to make a poor choice in one aspect.
In the latest chapter, I had Luna send Twilight the book that gave her the information about Nightmare Moon, and had planned some extensive conversations in a later chapter to cover this, and what/how it happened. A fine reader helped show me that this would be a bad idea (introducing drama to comedy) and so I have rewritten the last few paragraphs of the latest chapter to reflect Celestia having sent the book moments before her capture.
Sorry about this mess.
its all good. Some ideas, are great when you write em and post it. but after they've stewed for a bit, don't really pan out. So its all good
You shouldn't need to appoligize it's your world we are just here for the ride
Communicating is appreciated~
I would've edited it and quietly sat there in glee as people scratched their heads.
I'll be honest, I kind of liked it the other way.
I mean, it's your story and I do enjoy the way it is now (with Celestia having sent the book), but I don't think it needed changing. I was actually kind of interested in how it would pan out - maybe it can be re-used in a more dramatic story?
4582606 Yeah, I have a huge collection of plot ideas for stories, this one is going back into it for something later.