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Slight edit · 5:07am Jun 25th, 2017

Lots of new readers (at least to my stuff) might not realize that I write my stories quickly and don't have pre-readers/editors.

I do plan extensively ahead, but the speed I have been writing this particular story (Not Twilight's Problem) has led me to make a poor choice in one aspect.

In the latest chapter, I had Luna send Twilight the book that gave her the information about Nightmare Moon, and had planned some extensive conversations in a later chapter to cover this, and what/how it happened. A fine reader helped show me that this would be a bad idea (introducing drama to comedy) and so I have rewritten the last few paragraphs of the latest chapter to reflect Celestia having sent the book moments before her capture.

Sorry about this mess.

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Comments ( 5 )

its all good. Some ideas, are great when you write em and post it. but after they've stewed for a bit, don't really pan out. So its all good

You shouldn't need to appoligize it's your world we are just here for the ride

Communicating is appreciated~
I would've edited it and quietly sat there in glee as people scratched their heads.

I'll be honest, I kind of liked it the other way.

I mean, it's your story and I do enjoy the way it is now (with Celestia having sent the book), but I don't think it needed changing. I was actually kind of interested in how it would pan out - maybe it can be re-used in a more dramatic story?

4582606 Yeah, I have a huge collection of plot ideas for stories, this one is going back into it for something later. :twilightsmile:

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