Minor rewrites are done!

So I was finally able to find the time to do some very minor rewrites to the first 2 chapters of the swarm of Equus and ended up actually adding a few hundred words!

Now I feel I owe you all an explanation on why this took so long the simple fact Is that I've been really busy and just haven't been in the writing feel for the past month but hopefully things are going to clear soon and I should have AT LEAST one new chapter up by the end of next month. For the few who actually care about the story.

Now the rewrites weren't anything major but I do feel they were a minor Improvement. (Boy are a lot of comments obsolete now!)

I feel the first chapters were very ridged because I had a very clear Idea In mind hopefully the later chapters will flow better along with a better pace.