KOTD Overhaul · 4:55am Apr 30th, 2017
So I'm done with the next chapter, but I don't wanna release it until I'm done rewriting chapters 1 and 2. Basically it's occurred to me that those chapters need some work, especially since they're the first thing new readers will go through. I have a lot of experience moving a plot forward, but if I stop to think about it, I'm still new when to drop the background/setting information. Chapter 1 is a bit of a mess and breaks up combat in favor of a brief history lesson. I'm giving it a pretty large overhaul, but still keeping most of it. Basically there will be added scenes and information will be moved to better locations.