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GeodesicDragon


I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. Books are available again; check my userpage for details.

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  • 19 weeks
    Happy Holidays!

    Whatever you're celebrating, and even if you're not celebrating anything, I hope you have a great day today.

    Me? I'm going to spend the day either sleeping, or playing Season of Discovery in World of Warcraft Classic; I've got a guild to run now, after all, and I need to devote as much time as I can to keeping it going.

    Stay awesome.

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  • 40 weeks
    Hey Ho

    First of all, today marks 11 years to the day since I joined Fimfiction. Go me, I guess?

    Secondly, I'm still around, though I've been pretty busy as of late.

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  • 52 weeks
    Are you at Griffish Isles?

    If so, then I hope you're having fun! For those of you who don't know what that is, here's their website.

    I'm not at the convention myself, since I couldn't afford it this year, but I did take out an advert in the con book for my horse words. If you're here as a result of said ad, please let me know!

    That's all for now, remember to stay awesome!

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  • 63 weeks
    First Date With Twilight Reading

    The Mystery Fluttershy Fan has done a reading of First Date With Twilight, which I'd like to share with you all.

    Stay awesome!

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  • 67 weeks
    In Case You've Missed It

    I recently published a new story, the first one I've written for nearly two years. My Muse decided to pay me a visit, meaning I was able to whip this together; here's hoping said Muse sticks around for a while!


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Apr
7th
2017

Fixed A Major Plothole · 1:10pm Apr 7th, 2017

Hee-hee, 'plothole.' :rainbowlaugh:

Joking aside, I have just amended Chapter 14 of To Friend Is Human to fix a slight issue that I had with it.

Spoilers after the break. If you haven't read Parts One and Two of the series, do not click 'Read More!'

SERIOUSLY, HERE BE SPOILERS.

After Geo is shot by Derek (again), Twilight finds the note and hoofband he was going to use when he proposed to her. Then she signals for help and Celestia and Luna turn up.

Celestia then teleports them all home... but what about Geo's body? What happened to it?

Well, I've now corrected this, by changing the last few paragraphs of Chapter Fourteen to this:

Celestia returned the hug and stood up, turning to the Elements and taking a deep breath. "Come, let us return to Ponyville," she said, her horn glowing. "We can reminisce here."

Before she could charge her horn with magic, Geo's body began to glow. The eight mares looked at it, their faces showing confusion.

Confusion which turned to shock – and, in Twilight's case, sheer terror – as the body suddenly vanished in a flash of light.

Since you've read Parts One and Two (at least, I hope you have), then you will know that Geo being sent to Equestria was the result of the experiments being carried out by one Doctor Ace Sorou. However, his portals weren't exactly stable, so they didn't last long.

The flash of light mentioned at the end of the new paragraphs is the unstable portal returning him home.

I hope this makes sense, because it sounded a lot better in my head.

If you have any questions or comments, let me know.

Stay awesome.

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