Fixed A Major Plothole · 1:10pm Apr 7th, 2017
Hee-hee, 'plothole.'
Joking aside, I have just amended Chapter 14 of To Friend Is Human to fix a slight issue that I had with it.
Spoilers after the break. If you haven't read Parts One and Two of the series, do not click 'Read More!'
SERIOUSLY, HERE BE SPOILERS.
After Geo is shot by Derek (again), Twilight finds the note and hoofband he was going to use when he proposed to her. Then she signals for help and Celestia and Luna turn up.
Celestia then teleports them all home... but what about Geo's body? What happened to it?
Well, I've now corrected this, by changing the last few paragraphs of Chapter Fourteen to this:
Celestia returned the hug and stood up, turning to the Elements and taking a deep breath. "Come, let us return to Ponyville," she said, her horn glowing. "We can reminisce here."
Before she could charge her horn with magic, Geo's body began to glow. The eight mares looked at it, their faces showing confusion.
Confusion which turned to shock – and, in Twilight's case, sheer terror – as the body suddenly vanished in a flash of light.
Since you've read Parts One and Two (at least, I hope you have), then you will know that Geo being sent to Equestria was the result of the experiments being carried out by one Doctor Ace Sorou. However, his portals weren't exactly stable, so they didn't last long.
The flash of light mentioned at the end of the new paragraphs is the unstable portal returning him home.
I hope this makes sense, because it sounded a lot better in my head.
If you have any questions or comments, let me know.
Stay awesome.